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Monday, August 16, 2021

A story about a man that was in a war

 One day there was a old man he was in the war and he survived but he was sad because he lost some family and some frendes. He looked over bye the tank and he sore his dad his dad was in the arem and he front his dad died. He went to the tank solely he TIRED! around the kroner it was his dad "DAD! he said". He gave his dad a big hug. "I front you where ded" no the dad said". "come and have a cup of tea he said" "OK the dad said they sat down having a cuper they herd a nock on the door I will open it he said.


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1 comment:

  1. This is a great story Hunter! I love that you've used speech marks to show when someone is talking. What happens after the dad opens the door?

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